Not really English

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I with you. It's a bit too late to her at this time of night. I'll ask her to her intention to go ahead with the tomorrow.
my point of view, it would be a mistake to make that investment .
Let me an example of how this work. She could buy the shares from us in the name of her company and avoid paying personal tax on the .